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Narrative Part 2

Today me and Mele,Kolopa,Luisa,Jasmine went for a walk up the mountain when we went up the mountain we saw a house up the sky.we try to go up but it was to high then we look at the sunset, we look at it but i saw grey clouds i told my friend but they did listen they were stole watch the sunset but when they was watching the sunset. they
Saw the storm coming this way we try to run but it was to
Lats we were look but my friend found a cake we was so happy that my friend found a cake the end.

DMIC

Today Me and my group was doing this and this is what we did.

   

Narrative writing plan

this is my  Narrrative writing pland for this week.

Nelson the baby elephant and the Rescuing Nelson

This is my Reading work.

Addition/Subtraction

this is my Addition/Subtraction work for this week.

DMIC

this is our work for this week for DMIC.

Crabs

Hi  i learn about crabs and this is my work.

Recount

When I was five years old I went to my cousin’s birthday it was so fun because it had a bouncy castle and lot of Lollies and food. Then, we went to the movie and it was scary as. Then, the movie was finished. We went home and slept. The next day I was so happy and my family was too.

subtraction

this is  my maths work for this week we did + and - that what we did
for this week.

Te Wā Toi

Welcome back today to my blog! The name for this term’s inquiry is Te Wa Toi. We are going to be learning about art and painting. I feel excited about this term’s topic. I know that we can paint, draw and colour in.
At school at the moment I am struggling with maths. I think that coming to school every day and focussing on my learning will help with my maths.
I would like to do good in my art this term. My teachers will help me with this by telling me good ideas to help me with my art. I think that this topic will give me a chance to draw and paint.I feel good and excited about this term and the topic because Art is cool!

Wide-mouthed frog

this is my reading for today.

the scared recount

Last year, my family and I went to the playground. I was so scared because when i went on the flying fox, it went up and I held on tight and I was screaming.



First we all decided to go to the playground because there was nothing to do at home and we were bored. My mum and dad thought it would be a good idea to have a picnic at the playground too. We made lunch and climbed into the car and drove to the playground at Mission Bay.


When we got to Mission Bay, the playground was busy. So we decided to go to the playground at Okahu Bay. When we got there it wasn’t busy so we decided to stay.


We all raced to the big flying fox. I won and got to go first. But I was scared to go first. I hopped on and my sister pushed me before I was ready. I started to scream. I was scared. When it was my sister’s turn I pushed her back. She screamed just like me and I was laughing.


After that we were hungry so we went to eat. We ate chicken and watermelon.

DMIC maths

Addition

this is my work for this week.it was so fun for me .

math.

today on math me and my  group was going this when we did all
of it then to know that it spell move your body and it so fun with
my group that was for math.

sport

DMIC

HI THIS IS MY DMIC. i did this with Kauri,Kolopa,siosuas we had a little
 bit help from Miss Nua  then we was so happy this is our work.

DMIC

Today we was going DMIC. and my group was me and Eva,Kauri that was
my group it was so fun with my group for DMIC this is my DMIC i
hopes you like it for DMIC this week.

animation

Hi my name is kesaia I am going to show my writing to you hear is.  This term we a

learning about move ya’ body and the objects that we

We need so that we can move our bodys by eating the right food and Sleeping

the right time.My   animation is auto running like school a competing .

IT going to shows people at the back moving they body and the front Running and

moving they body to.IT going to shows people at the back moving they body and the

front Running and moving they body to.  

sheep writing

I  was walking a along the path i saw a girl then it saw me and i was hungry and i was scare then i stay to run as fast as i can then i Stop i saw a tree and i was so hungry that i eat grass and i saw her walk i think she was scare and i was scare to.

Rolling Dice

Today me and my friend was finishing of our maths it was fun
i wish there was another task like this.

sheep

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her pase and she realized others with them touching distance of her lamb. she let out her loud lobe lep witch echoed across the paddick. The sleeping lamb lifted it head and turn towards us withit slowly turning with it sleep as the sheep got closer and closer i thought about whether i should turn and run i began to panic was she going to a atack me holding my breath i frozed i side the sheep dodge me and run be protectively and run to it lamb phew that was a close call.

swimming across the pool

DMIC

On DMIC.me and my group it was me and Madi,Kauri,Siosiua
 i was answering questions so i can understand that what i do for
DMIC

Movie Narrative

One hot sunny day, me, Kolopa,Luisa, Sauma, Mele went up the mountains.
 We went to the mountains to run for exercise.
We started to feel tired and we hadn’t had any lunch or anything to drink.
 We decided to have a rest and then we all saw a  bench.
 We sat down on the bench, to have a drink and some lunch.
We didn’t notice that it was getting dark and that soon it would be night time.
 We looked around and we didn’t see anything that we recognised.
We realised that we couldn’t find our way home.
 Then we saw some people and we asked them “ Can we have some help?”
 and they said “Yes.” Then we found our way home.

Today in writing  we were editing with my buddy it was Victoria  check if we have full stops comma  that what me and my buddy check on  it 

DMIC

On DMIC. we had eating groups my eating groups
RaeJae and Maddison it was so fun.

the Hailstorm

Narrative writing plan

My Maths work

This is how I solved my Question about maths I hoped you learned from this.

DMIC

IN DMIC we had time my time was me and lorenzo,troy,kitione that was my time it was so fun.

Movie Narrative

On a day at was school there was a name call Simon he was a good friend and he h
ad friend that was kauri and Lealofi they were best friends they play and  Lea
rn with Each other then they had lunch they would always sit next to each other
and never sit separately when lunch was finish they were trying to find a game
to play simon had a idea the kauri had a idea but all of them had a idea so it
was home time .

Narrative writing plan

On a sunny day i was doing my work with my friends.
I can't wait to see how my story turn's out!

skydiving

To day on the weekend i went to skydiving when i went on the airplane i was so srcared that my sis came with me and i was not scared and then we was so happy that we was have fun. And all of my family and i was so so happy that i was so excited and we are all happy but one was srcared like me.

Narrrative

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A na/rrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end.  It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.

Image Attributions: Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere. Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.

Begin Writing Here:on Saturday in the morning i fall onto the chair and had a Dream about a Hot air balloon. Then  i went to Pop in then i fly so high That I was so scared’ That I was goto fall down then i Woke up and. then i saw a big shadow i went outside and then i look up and i saw the hot air balloon and i was so happy when I looked on top to the sky. In the evening i was still flying up then i falled down on the ground and my brother and sister were helping me up.

Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:

I have:
1	Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.
2	I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.
3	I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.
4	I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.

Once you are finished… Make sure your blog post includes: JPEG of your planning A copy of the picture you choose to write about (correctly attributed) AND a picture which you have drawn to go with your writing. Your story from above Add these labels to your writing. Can you think of any others you could add?         2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3 Copy the URL to your blog post and paste it to the blog log.

tow Little gold.

Toby and BJ

Dogs

Hi i did went to camp but i went to room 11 and 12 my teacher was mr vogt we had fun with him there was some Year4 and it was oos fun with the Year4 some people in room 9 and 10 did go to camp but i had some frieos that Year5 it was kolopa it was fun becaseu we went to kiwisport then we went back to cassl.