Narrative Part 2

Today me and Mele,Kolopa,Luisa,Jasmine went for a walk up the mountain when we went up the mountain we saw a house up the sky.we try to go up but it was to high then we look at the sunset, we look at it but i saw grey clouds i told my friend but they did listen they were stole watch the sunset but when they was watching the sunset. they
Saw the storm coming this way we try to run but it was to
Lats we were look but my friend found a cake we was so happy that my friend found a cake the end.