One hot sunny day, me, Kolopa,Luisa, Sauma, Mele went up the mountains.
We went to the mountains to run for exercise.
We started to feel tired and we hadn’t had any lunch or anything to drink.
We decided to have a rest and then we all saw a bench.
We sat down on the bench, to have a drink and some lunch.
We didn’t notice that it was getting dark and that soon it would be night time.
We looked around and we didn’t see anything that we recognised.
We realised that we couldn’t find our way home.
Then we saw some people and we asked them “ Can we have some help?”
and they said “Yes.” Then we found our way home.
We went to the mountains to run for exercise.
We started to feel tired and we hadn’t had any lunch or anything to drink.
We decided to have a rest and then we all saw a bench.
We sat down on the bench, to have a drink and some lunch.
We didn’t notice that it was getting dark and that soon it would be night time.
We looked around and we didn’t see anything that we recognised.
We realised that we couldn’t find our way home.
Then we saw some people and we asked them “ Can we have some help?”
and they said “Yes.” Then we found our way home.
Today in writing we were editing with my buddy it was Victoria check if we have full stops comma that what me and my buddy check on it
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