Friday, 10 August 2018
Friday, 29 June 2018
To day on the weekend i went to skydiving when i went on the airplane i was so srcared that my sis came with me and i was not scared and then we was so happy that we was have fun. And all of my family and i was so so happy that i was so excited and we are all happy but one was srcared like me.
Wednesday, 13 June 2018
Choose It Narrative
Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.
When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.
Don’t forget! A na/rrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.
Begin Writing Here:on Saturday in the morning i fall onto the chair and had a Dream about a Hot air balloon. Then i went to Pop in then i fly so high That I was so scared’ That I was goto fall down then i Woke up and. then i saw a big shadow i went outside and then i look up and i saw the hot air balloon and i was so happy when I looked on top to the sky. In the evening i was still flying up then i falled down on the ground and my brother and sister were helping me up.
Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:
Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.
I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.
I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.
I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.
Once you are finished…
2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3
Friday, 16 March 2018
Hi i did went to camp but i went to room 11 and 12 my teacher was mr vogt we had fun with him there was some Year4 and it was oos fun with the Year4 some people in room 9 and 10 did go to camp but i had some frieos that Year5 it was kolopa it was fun becaseu we went to kiwisport then we went back to cassl.