sport

sheep

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her pase and she realized others with them touching distance of her lamb. she let out her loud lobe lep witch echoed across the paddick. The sleeping lamb lifted it head and turn towards us withit slowly turning with it sleep as the sheep got closer and closer i thought about whether i should turn and run i began to panic was she going to a atack me holding my breath i frozed i side the sheep dodge me and run be protectively and run to it lamb phew that was a close call.

Movie Narrative

One hot sunny day, me, Kolopa,Luisa, Sauma, Mele went up the mountains.
 We went to the mountains to run for exercise.
We started to feel tired and we hadn’t had any lunch or anything to drink.
 We decided to have a rest and then we all saw a  bench.
 We sat down on the bench, to have a drink and some lunch.
We didn’t notice that it was getting dark and that soon it would be night time.
 We looked around and we didn’t see anything that we recognised.
We realised that we couldn’t find our way home.
 Then we saw some people and we asked them “ Can we have some help?”
 and they said “Yes.” Then we found our way home.

Today in writing  we were editing with my buddy it was Victoria  check if we have full stops comma  that what me and my buddy check on  it 

Narrative writing plan

Movie Narrative

On a day at was school there was a name call Simon he was a good friend and he h
ad friend that was kauri and Lealofi they were best friends they play and  Lea
rn with Each other then they had lunch they would always sit next to each other
and never sit separately when lunch was finish they were trying to find a game
to play simon had a idea the kauri had a idea but all of them had a idea so it
was home time .

skydiving

To day on the weekend i went to skydiving when i went on the airplane i was so srcared that my sis came with me and i was not scared and then we was so happy that we was have fun. And all of my family and i was so so happy that i was so excited and we are all happy but one was srcared like me.